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Need some feedback on a work in progress? Try the Poets' Coop's e-Group. Cut & paste your poem into this free "electronic bulletin board" for others to critique. To get your own creative juices flowing, maybe you just need to reflect on another's poem or to give our monthly Poetic Challenge a try. Come give some constructive criticism. Check back often to see what the others have to say or check the box to get an email whenever someone has commented.


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Subject:   DAD
Name:   Jessica Gippert
Date Posted:   Mar 8, 04 - 9:53 AM
Message:   DAD
why aren't you here
why do you do this to me
you make me feel like this
this feeling...
this isn't right
it's not fair that you're doing this
yelling and fighting
you said you want to be here
you say you want to be a family
what kind of a man are you
I question your love for me
you said that you would be here
but you weren't
you don't know how you make me feel
if you did you would'nt leve
   


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