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Need some feedback on a work in progress? Try the Poets' Coop's e-Group. Cut & paste your poem into this free "electronic bulletin board" for others to critique. To get your own creative juices flowing, maybe you just need to reflect on another's poem or to give our monthly Poetic Challenge a try. Come give some constructive criticism. Check back often to see what the others have to say or check the box to get an email whenever someone has commented.


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Subject:   Re: Need someone to take a look at my new work please!
Name:   M. D.
Date Posted:   Apr 12, 04 - 6:10 PM
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Message:   Sarah,
This work has much to be proud of:
Nice use of repeating
Builds nicely.
Some great lines expressing universal emotions
"When betrayal bitters each kiss" is my fav

Thnx for posting
~MD
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Re: Need someone to take a look at my new work please! by Lynn Kincanon · Jan 25, 05 - 6:36 PM


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