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Subject:   poem
Name:   Dale A. Edmands
Date Posted:   Feb 8, 03 - 1:38 PM
Email:   webmaster@kookamongasquare.zzn.com
Message:   he Blanket



I'm alone now; don't ask me how I know.

Yesterday, I went to the "Dollar" store,

and bought myself a blanket; a pale green,

woolen blanket for five bucks.

Of course I've had blankets before;

Some nurse wrapped me in one; it was

probably blue, and my mother was always

tucking me in, and I always took one or

two to the beach.

I mean, I've had horse blankets, electric

blankets, heavy blankets and thin blankets.

But I never ever bought one for myself.

On the way home, when no one was looking,

I reached inside the bag and touched it,

and seeing no one was watching, I smiled.

No, my name's not Linus,and I'm not prone

to sucking my thumb, but I'll tell you

one thing; later that night, lying on my

usual spot, the floor, I pulled the blanket

over me, smiled one more time

to the silent, lonely darkness,

and slept better than I have for years.

Sometimes, the best thing about being alone

is being alone.
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Re: poem by M. D. Friedman · Mar 6, 03 - 9:43 AM
Re: poem by Spiros Zafiris · Sep 12, 03 - 2:38 PM


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