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Subject:   Flesh Picnic
Name:   Irma
Date Posted:   Mar 6, 03 - 5:49 PM
Email:   irmastar@hotmail.com
Message:   Flesh picinic

A naked sonnett

By Irma



Liquid courage fogged decision making

Last night's lines successfully picked you up

I always get away with faking

Dirty minds drink from my Dixie cup.



Human musk fills the bedroom air

Roll over, count the used protection

Kiss good-bye, eyes absent of care

Never again will we make that connection.



Conscious of a rap-tap upon the door

Toxins twist, swirl inside your head

Last night's adventure, next to a chore

Motivation lacking to exit bed



The flesh picnic carried away

By ants of sweet decay

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Re: Flesh Picnic by M. D. Friedman · Mar 7, 03 - 8:45 AM


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