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Poets' Coop's E-Group Forum: A Virtual Writers' Group
Need some feedback on a work in progress? Try the Poets' Coop's e-Group. Cut & paste your poem into this free "electronic bulletin board" for others to critique. To get your own creative juices flowing, maybe you just need to reflect on another's poem or to give our monthly Poetic Challenge a try. Come give some constructive criticism. Check back often to see what the others have to say or check the box to get an email whenever someone has commented.


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Subject:   Re: Need someone to take a look at my new work please!
Name:   Lynn Kincanon
Date Posted:   Jan 25, 05 - 6:36 PM
Email:   lkincanon@comcast.net
Message:   Sarah
By now, these feelings are probably less intense, but no less hard earned. My suggestion is to take a few of the " Whens"out to the response lines, and make it more tight, like the taut throat clenching painful feelings it evokes. Otherwise this poem has a lot to say, and says it well!
   


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