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ENGLISH VERSION: Somebody SHOULD CRY!

ENGLISH VERSION: Somebody SHOULD CRY!

to the institutionally areas of all children /
who have sparrow hearts /
although they are the real potentially gigantic heroes /

*+*

if we could meet today on a bus
maybe sitting far from each other
the time changed itself /
the definition of love or you ande me /
not the same as human and widely
...
still human /
what a complex animal, we are actually /
XXXXXX'dan entering an ip number /
a few nights in a row, where XXXXXX is looking /
in the same poetry, I feel, /
like a coup tearful eyes, /
I am breathless, like a distant shadow/
like a kind secoind one eye deeply in memories inside of my heart /
divided by the nights of dreams
...
but me, then... /
if you could know/
you should know!...!

...
why it's so hard to be loved, Jesus?

*+*

part -II-

to the institutionally areas of all children /
who have sparrow hearts /
although they are the real potentially gigantic heroes /
I feel you
I've been in the same wards
but I
...
why it's so hard to be human, Jesus?
...

be realistic, you say;
inside their own questions /
I feel me powerless /
all boarding children /
universe /
more innocent /
complex and has increased more and more, /
what questions can I answer, I'm desperate /
...
the simplest, easy way to escape /
storing a handful tears /
I can say only a handful of words, simply words
...
if there were spell has reached the voice /
I could never get tired to kiss your eyes, /
especially my childhood, like a kind film /
the front of your sights
...
dreams through dreams /
I see myself
..
if you want to hear, but not necessarily something special /
now I know this:

the most beautiful words /
like a wedding dress /
the most significant media hid /
when it came, I got /

did you know:
the world's largest passions,
didn't happen yet!

I envy each and every one
because the most greatest in the /
can be created by heroes /
among you ...

everything that people may riot, please!
can be wrong, do not hesitate!
if you rounded and rounde by the circles of fire /
after all /
don't compromise in love!

NEVER AND EVER, MAN!

*+*

before my big farewell /
I'Il ask anything more
this time I'm going outside the literature, no matter /

I must ask because it is really important something /
I do beg you promise;
never smoking!


* This poem, published at the same time in 5 languages ​​on 5 continents /
in fact, it contains all the kids because ...
...
our childhood in hearts
..
..
...


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originally titled: somebody should cry!

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