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So, i'm a coward.-- happy new year America--England

So, I‘m a coward.

Would it better if men were more scared,
And women stopped praising he-men, who dared,
Would it be better if tenderness reigned?
And blood and guts nerviest held and restrained.

Would it be better if cowards prevailed?
And we kissed and caressed all those who failed.
Ticker tape welcomes for those who are quiet.
Who mind their own business, refusing to fight?

Me thinks would be better to stop making guns,
By spending the money on laughter and puns,
I hope in the future we’ll think again,
And governments think deeply bout women and men.

The Animal kingdoms no problem at all.
Its humans that’s spreading and taking it all.
Should we consider, our productive rate.
Lesson our urge to procreate.

China had fun with this little game,
Should we take stock and do the same,
Nature tells us to watch our stock.
Or we could be in, for a blooming big shock.

I woke up this morning and this came to mind.
Silly old me, just trying to be kind..
My one celled brain gave its best shot.
Im sorry folks but that’s all ive got

Jb a coy 3 para.05
Peter C




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Dec 31st, 2004 - 5:08 PM Re: So, i'm a coward.

Your doing fine old son .
HAPPY NEW YEAR .


Peter C
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