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Poets' Coop's E-Group Forum: A Virtual Writers' Group
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war

The Sand War



the ones with towels
they are coming
for what
i'm not sure
surely something
they come with knives
swords and sticks
they come with plots
of evil tricks
arriving with beady eyes
taking our country by suprise
we can not listen to their conceited lies
even if that bas***d tries
the taliban with satan as their right hand man
they'll make you disapear into the sand
as contridictive as a black KKK clan
what are you hiding under your rag
why do you think your so f***ing bad
try to demoralize your women
we'll send you sand n*****s swimm'in
maybe well have to kill you all
just so your country will fall
then we'll build a shopping mall
or maybe we could build a zoo
and treat you like animals too
starve you untill your see-through
were taking the oil with our crew
so when your on the travel channel
we can say we took that too
no sense in wasting breath to yell
i know i'll see you all in hell