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Poets' Coop's E-Group Forum: A Virtual Writers' Group

Need some feedback on a work in progress? Try the Poets' Coop's e-Group. Cut & paste your poem into this free "electronic bulletin board" for others to critique. To get your own creative juices flowing, maybe you just need to reflect on another's poem or to give our monthly Poetic Challenge a try. Come give some constructive criticism. Check back often to see what the others have to say or check the box to get an email whenever someone has commented.

Poets' Coop's E-Group Forum: A Virtual Writers' Group
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Re: THE SHINEY SHOES

Paul,

I like this Ode to the 3 minute song. As a fellow musician, I understand how the formulas for success often rob us of the real music. The music of the soul endures only the moment of passion despite the best efforts of the music money machine that try to bottle the passion but spend more on the label than the contents. Nice job of weaving the words of Dylan Thomas into a modern tapestry. Rage on brother.

MD