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by aftondarke
by aftondarke
ENGLISH VERSION: Somebody SHOULD CRY!
ENGLISH VERSION: Somebody SHOULD CRY!
to the institutionally areas of all children /
who have sparrow hearts /
although they are the real potentially gigantic heroes /
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if we could meet today on a bus
maybe sitting far from each other
the time changed...
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Last Post: Dec 21, 2012 3:26am
by E k r e m T O...
by E k r e m T O...
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I found an awesome website for printing t-shirts, brochures, banners, and stuff.
The reason I'm posting it, is because their prices are low, and I want to support them.
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Last Post: Dec 10, 2008 5:23pm
by Hannah
by Hannah
BitTorrent Multi-Search engine?
Anyone here use Torrents? I found this multi-search engine for Torrents. I thought you guys might be interested?
Click Here: TorrentPond.com
URL:
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Last Post: Apr 18, 2006 12:57pm
by Joe
by Joe
Need someone to take a look at my new work please!
When all is said and done
And there's nothing left to say
When yesterday means everything
When it's the reason they can't stay
When a heart is all but hollowed
When the tears are all but dust
When I'm sorry has no meaning
When there's nothing left to trust
Wh...
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Last Post: Jan 25, 2005 6:36pm
by Lynn Kincanon
by Lynn Kincanon
So, i'm a coward.-- happy new year America--England
So, I‘m a coward.
Would it better if men were more scared,
And women stopped praising he-men, who dared,
Would it be better if tenderness reigned?
And blood and guts nerviest held and restrained.
Would it be better if cowards prevailed?
And we kissed...
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Last Post: Jan 2, 2005 1:57pm
by jb
by jb
Fall
AUTUMN / FALL.
The ground awash with dying leaves,
as dismissive,sleepy, wearisome, trees,
cast them off to flutter down,
and die unwanted on winters ground.
Cold and cheerless the autumn air,
offers nothing, to help or care,
huddled together, as if for ch...
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Last Post: Aug 18, 2004 1:42am
by Jb
by Jb
The Skylark
The Sky Lark.
We hardly see this twittering bird,
Mystery abounds only sounds are heard,
Pylons stretching for miles around,
Golden cornfields its terrain abound.
Moths and butterflies all in view,
After sucking the morning dew,
See the sparrowhawk flutter...
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Last Post: Aug 18, 2004 1:36am
by Jb
by Jb
Brief Encounter
Brief Encounter.
An uneasy glance across the room.
A second glance, none to soon,
She's looking at me, thats for sure,
She's very smart, with much allure.
The guys she's with, seems to care,
His arm around a waist that's bare,
She turns him, with his back...
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Last Post: Aug 18, 2004 1:29am
by Jb
by Jb
Dawn
DAWN
At first a misty stirring light,
Dewdrops glisten, still and bright,.
The sun begins its dewy climb,
As it's done from dawn of time,
Something stirs in the bush.
Quickly silenced, not to rush.
A misty meadow appears in view,
Bidding the silent night...
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Last Post: Aug 18, 2004 1:21am
by Jb
by Jb
WARTIME LEICESTER
Halcyon Days
Walking round,or sitting down,
I often get my mind around,
Things that happened long ago,
Up to my waist in drifting snow.
Or when I wondered how and why,
Birds took wing and learned to fly,
When women often talked of war,
And boyfriends they...
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Last Post: Aug 10, 2004 5:34am
by jb
by jb
WHAT IS IT THEN?
What is it, superstition?.
What is it then that makes us pray,
That makes us creep and crawl all day,
That makes us read some silly script,
Our pride and confidence slyly stripped.
What is then, that transfers our minds,
To heavens and angels, and spiritual...
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Last Post: Aug 8, 2004 4:06am
by jb
by jb
The oak in winter
The Oak
Don’t stare at me in winter time,
Im just an oak tree not a pine,
Pines stay neatly dressed all year,
Come winters chill they have no fear.
From chilly winds and freezing snow,
That rack my bough from top to toe,
Pouring rain and biting sleet...
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Last Post: Aug 8, 2004 3:57am
by jb
by jb
happiness book
I've got a problem!
I'm writing a book on happiness and as part of the study i'm doing a survey on the different ways in which people think.
the problem is this- i need at least 500 surveys filled in to make the results valid. any ideas on how i can do this?
pleas...
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Last Post: Jul 21, 2004 9:34am
by Oscar Alexander
by Oscar Alexander
YOU
YOU
I thought of you again today,
Did you host some small soiree?
I feel you are amongst your friends,
Unless offcourse my mind transcends.
Occasionally, I get like this,
The precincts of my mind dismiss,
Any thoughts that you are down,
And tears beget th...
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Last Post: Jul 13, 2004 1:02pm
by JB
by JB
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Last Post: Apr 21, 2004 8:57am
by M. D. Friedman
by M. D. Friedman
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Apr 21, 2004 8:57am
by M. D. Friedman
by M. D. Friedman
Brief Encounter
Brief Encounter.
An uneasy glance across the room.
A second glance, none to soon,
She’s looking at me thats for sure,
She’s very smart with much allure.
The guys she’s with seems to care,
His arm around a waist that’s bare,
She turns him with his back to m...
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Last Post: Apr 17, 2004 4:18am
by jb
by jb
Poetic Challenges
Please post your poems composed to meet the monthly challenges under this topic thread. All poems must somehow explicitly or even vaguely include, quote, or somehow reference the "Challenge Phrase” for that month.
~ M.D.
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Last Post: Apr 12, 2004 6:04pm
by M. D.
by M. D.
New Poem for Comment
The Making of the Desert
In these last blistering days
before the growing desert possesses
what is left of green,
we wonder at what we have made,
we reflect on what we
have inadvertently built from our greed.
So this barren plain ridden raw by the sun
i...
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Last Post: Apr 12, 2004 12:31pm
by betty
by betty
Walk with me
Walk with me.
When I say I love you then,
You mean you want to hear again?
Your face reveals nought to me,
I feel I need to find some key.
I’m okay within myself,
Would you care to trouble your self,
Ever thought to lower your pride,
Put personal feelings...
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Last Post: Apr 9, 2004 1:08am
by jb
by jb
Really Funny Simpsons Parody!!!
I found this really funny Simpson's Parody. I thought you guys might enjoy it
Click here: The Singhsons
URL:
http://www.ansme.com/reference/humor/singhsons.html
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Last Post: Mar 30, 2004 3:51pm
by The Simpsons
by The Simpsons
Degradation on the Loam
I saw him standing there today
I tried to run away but I didn't run fast enough and
Now he has me on the ground
I kick
I fight
I scream
He just laughs while looking down on me
Knowing I can’t break free
Quickly he turns my dress to tatters and
I feel...
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Last Post: Mar 12, 2004 4:55pm
by Stefanie
by Stefanie
DAD
DAD
why aren't you here
why do you do this to me
you make me feel like this
this feeling...
this isn't right
it's not fair that you're doing this
yelling and fighting
you said you want to be here
you say you want to be a family
what kind of a man a...
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Last Post: Mar 8, 2004 9:53am
by Jessica Gippert
by Jessica Gippert
war
The Sand War
the ones with towels
they are coming
for what
i'm not sure
surely something
they come with knives
swords and sticks
they come with plots
of evil tricks
arriving with beady eyes
taking our country by suprise
we can not listen to their c...
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Last Post: Mar 8, 2004 9:52am
by morgan
by morgan
Poetry contest
Hello all, just want to say thanks for all your poems and comments. In return, I want to let you all know about this small poetry contest at Jeskarks Palace. Prizes are good and only the 1st 125 poems submitted are judged. This is there 1st annual contest and out o...
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Last Post: Dec 17, 2003 5:40pm
by William
by William
poem
he Blanket
I'm alone now; don't ask me how I know.
Yesterday, I went to the "Dollar" store,
and bought myself a blanket; a pale green,
woolen blanket for five bucks.
Of course I've had blankets before;
Some nurse wrapped me in one; it was
probably blue, and...
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Last Post: Sep 12, 2003 2:38pm
by Spiros Zafiris
by Spiros Zafiris
translation: G. A. Becquer - Rima 1
I know a strange gigantic hymn
that announces dawn in the night of the soul,
and these pages are cadences of this hymn
that the air diffuses into shadows.
I wanted to capture it, a man
taming a rebellious, stingy language,
with words that were at the same tim...
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Last Post: Aug 25, 2003 4:37pm
by Howard A. Landma...
by Howard A. Landma...
COMA
COMA
(A 20 year old man wakens from a19 year coma to meet his 19 year old daughter.)
You say you are my daughter,
yet you are no older than I.
Am I still in the time of my dying,
when from the sudden screech,
my head marbled the windshield?
What floods o...
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Last Post: Aug 1, 2003 7:35am
by M.D. Friedman
by M.D. Friedman
Howday all and..
Hey Java Lounge Crew.... Thought I would say hi, and send a poem along I just wrote, here at the first anual Nebraska Writers confernce. A week study and writing of nothing but poetry, aw, life is sweet. Omaha is good, good readings, good people...two week and diging...
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Last Post: Jul 16, 2003 10:50am
by Rich Furman
by Rich Furman
Now His Own
Now His Own-for Max1.When the steam risesfrom rain in quietpuddles of reflection,the hungry night skydarkens the waylike shards of black chinashattered on the shiningskin of the streetstretchesbeyond the silkof near white mistand the hard glareof the distant,beyond w...
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Last Post: Jul 10, 2003 9:59am
by M.D. Friedman
by M.D. Friedman
My website
Hello All.
I am Jean E Marre from Arnéux in France. I am have been writing some poems in English (don't come too hard, I'm an ameteur!)and i would like your response.
My internet website is: http://www.geocities.com/marrejean2003/jeanemarre.html?
Please com...
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Last Post: Apr 29, 2003 5:57am
by Jean E Marre
by Jean E Marre
Listen to sound poems and acoustic music online
On this sound website by visiting the following categories you can listen online to dozens of original recordings covering all sorts of acoustic music and popular and classic English poetry by just clicking on the greyed out wav attachment section at the bottom of ea...
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Last Post: Apr 18, 2003 8:10am
by jim clark..Londo...
by jim clark..Londo...
The Gift
The Gift
for M.D.'s Birthday
by Irma Jackson
The gift can't be
wrapped, incubated under a tree
Genius is
a gift
not to be donated to the
Goodwill
until it's between the vest of a sky blue three piece suit
and a starched white dress sh...
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Last Post: Mar 22, 2003 6:59am
by Irma
by Irma
Flesh Picnic
Flesh picinic
A naked sonnett
By Irma
Liquid courage fogged decision making
Last night's lines successfully picked you up
I always get away with faking
Dirty minds drink from my Dixie cup.
Human musk fills the bedroom air
Roll over, count the used pr...
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Last Post: Mar 6, 2003 5:49pm
by Irma
by Irma
Naked in NY
Naked in NY
Rain falls from the lip of
the concrete castle
Like mercury
Dripping
Beading
before slowly
soaking the soft
Black suede
Bleeding
Bluing
the shoulders of
his white t-shirt
clinging to his clavical
his gray eye meets her
she greet...
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Last Post: Feb 22, 2003 3:34pm
by Irma
by Irma
Kookamonga Square News Letter
Dear Friends of Poets Cooperative E-Group Forum:
First, let me express my graditude for all your thoughtful and supportive comments regarding the poetry I have posted here. Your individual feedback has been, well, "INSPIRATIONAL."
--------------------------------...
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Last Post: Feb 6, 2003 5:47pm
by Dale A. Edmands
by Dale A. Edmands
poem
Seasons Amid War
This winter of war blankets our lives like a black and endless snow.
Inside our warm homes we shiver from the chill of 'live' coverage
Of the Middle East, our hearts weighted by the day's count-
First none, then three, then eleven, then twenty,...
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Last Post: Feb 4, 2003 2:16am
by Dale A. Edmands
by Dale A. Edmands
anecdote&poem
"Thank you both for your thoughtful comments on my poem. That was
a "difficult" year, obviously; but not without some redemption. Of
course there was the spring; "April is the cruellest month, breeding
liclacs out of the dead land, mixing memory and desire, stirri...
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Last Post: Feb 3, 2003 2:08pm
by Dale A. Edmands
by Dale A. Edmands
Everyday Life
Born into a world unforgiving,
Knowing pain before even living.
Trying so hard without results,
Fear envelopes all my hopes.
Just a child with problems i must face,
Learning how to cope in this fast paced race.
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Last Post: Jan 13, 2003 4:21pm
by kimberly
by kimberly
Feasting in America
Feasting in America
I don’t remember what I ate that day.
The floor was bowed as if
the weight of indecisive feet
had settled it into a tired smile
smoothed by spilled
grease and friction.
I don’t remember what I ate.
Perhaps lasagna,
certainly peppercin...
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Last Post: Jan 7, 2003 6:14am
by M.D. Friedman
by M.D. Friedman
THE SHINEY SHOES
THE SHINEY SHOES
The God men of shiney shoes with black ties
create art from the vision of the lie - the depth of art.
Shiney shoes, record man, rap man, rock man.
Selling us the recipe for power and control of the song cycle.
The song cycle married with the...
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Last Post: Jan 2, 2003 9:55pm
by Paul Adams
by Paul Adams
Birth and Regulation
BIRTH and REGULATION
You came like an explosion of crys and smiles.
Relief and and protest become one.
You learned to walk with caution,
making your way to the world.
Your smile and imagination reflect all that is.
All that is beauty, love, and simplicity...
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Last Post: Jan 2, 2003 9:52pm
by Paul Adams
by Paul Adams
Good Dog
GOOD DOG
As the idea of you reached fruition,
genetic makeup tumpled through space from infinity
like dice, with volitional intention.
This idea landed here with black & white markings.
The opposite of that considered normal.
Outlines of black w...
Views: 306 Replies: 0
Last Post: Jan 2, 2003 9:50pm
by Paul Adams
by Paul Adams
No Subject
CRAZY BURRITO
I love you dear Burrito.
Encompassed in a tubular crepe
rocketing my taste buds and neurotransmitters
into a field of delight.
I love being drawn metaphorically into the
conflict of the human condition.
The condition of you Burretto being
d...
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Last Post: Jan 2, 2003 9:48pm
by Paul Adams
by Paul Adams
The Magic Way
The Magic Way
few come this way
fewer still by choice
there is nothing here
nothing human to lie against
no touch to touch
nothing warm but
that which burns
inside
no comfort here
in the layers of flesh
that cover me
like sheets of glass
nothing...
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Last Post: Dec 30, 2002 9:01pm
by M.D. Friedman
by M.D. Friedman
